<p>Hey guys, could somebody critique my CommonApp essay? It's a fairly strange take on the first topic, but I think I need some help with it. Also, how do you think it presents me?</p>
<p>Please, no '09ers, especially those applying to Cornell.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>
<p>sure, i’ll take a look at it</p>
<p>sure i’ll take a look at it!</p>
<p>Sure, I’d love to read it… and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account… but I’d prefer a pm</p>
<p><a href=“mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu”>sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>