CommonApp Rough Draft: Need a Proofreader.

<p>Hi, I'm in the process of getting all of my essays sorted out for next year, and I recently wrote my commonapp essay(I know it will be wiped over the summer, and I have it saved). I personally think it's a little too emotional for an admission essay, but seeing as I've never submitted one I wouldn't know. Any would be appreciated. If you could take the time to read it please say something. Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

<p>I mean I have no knowledge or experience with college essays, but I guess I can proof read it for you. </p>

<p>I can read it</p>