<p>Can someone care to read and revise my short answer? I'm not an excellent writer so I'll need as much help as I can get. Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>I can look over it, just PM it to me :)</p>
<p>Anyone else? I'll need lots of help!</p>
<p>Bump........</p>
<p>I'll need as much hope as I can get!</p>
<p>pm me~!!!!!!!!!!!</p>
<p>Yeppo! I'll help! Just PM it, and I'll get back to you ASAP with my critique/opinion. :)</p>
<p>I'll read. :)</p>
<p>I will read and give you a feedback!</p>