Compelling Essay

<p>Newstandard32, I emailed it to you. Please let me know if you’ve receievd it.</p>

<p>Realistically speaking…in the event that I am accepted to GS, I still may not be able to go because they only offer awards up to $18,000…which isn’t nearly enough. Sucks that GS gets the messy end of the stick while CC students can enjoy a full ride.</p>

<p>Could somebody look over my essay? It’s nearly done and I need a bit of input…</p>

<p>PM me MonkeyGS. I’ll give you some feedback. (I submitted my essay in early Feb).</p>

<p>To the people who already submitted their essays, did you write mostly in a factual tone, as the prompt kind of suggests it, or did you use a narrative and descriptive approach to describe certain parts or aspects of your life?</p>

<p>If not, how did you structure an interesting and capturing intro?</p>

<p>I am having some trouble with it.</p>

<p>I tried to write a narrative, using points of my life to answer the questions. Towards the end I took a more direct approach as the questions were well out of the purview of my life/school experience. (ie, plans for the future)</p>

<p>I did the same thing ^^</p>