<p>Ok, so I wrote my essay and asked two friends to read it. I respect these two friends' opinions very much, but I recieved very conflicting opinions. One thought it was very good, while the other said the essay doesn't say very much about me. Would anybody please read it and give me some some more opinions? Thanks a million in advance.</p>
<p>ill read.....</p>
<p>send it over :) i'll read & give feedback</p>
<p>ill read the essay</p>
<p>I can read it too !</p>
<p>PM meeeee!</p>