<p>Decision: Accepted</p>
<p>Not going to be super specific for anonymity but whatever who cares:</p>
<p>Objective:[ul]
[<em>] SAT I (breakdown): 2350: M 780 R 800 W 770
[</em>] SAT I superscore (breakdown): Final time, only sent one
[<em>] ACT (breakdown):
[</em>] ACT superscore (breakdown):
[<em>] SAT II: Physics 780 Bio 790 MathII 800
[</em>] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.90
[<em>] Weighted GPA:
[</em>] Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): n/a
[<em>] AP (place score in parentheses): Bio 5, US History 5, BC Calc 5/4, English Lit 4, US Gov 5, Comp prog. A 4 and a couple unreported 3’s (didn’t really study for any of them)
[</em>] IB (place score in parentheses): IB HL Spanish 6
[<em>] Senior Year Course Load: Six IB classes; finished all hard stuff in junior year tho
[</em>] Number of other RD applicants in your school: Dunno, 30?
[li] Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.):[/ul] wrote a good bio paper but missed the deadline</p>[/li]
<p>Subjective:[ul]
[<em>] Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses): Haha these I can say were stellar. Generally: Started serious nonprofit organization/science social entrepreneurship company with accompanying awards, NHS prez; high leadership in student government; Newspaper editor in chief; Top leadership in numerous other community service activities dating back 4 years
[</em>] Job/Work Experience: Very serious scientific research position; co authored several papers
[li] Volunteer/Community service:[/ul]</p>[/li]
<p>Writing (Write a brief description and Rate Quality on 1-10 Scale; 10 as Best):[ul]
[<em>] Essays (Include Subjects):
[</em>] What You Do For Pleasure: cooking and making others feel welcome/happy 7
[<em>] Department at MIT: biology and stem cell research, ties into my current work with stem cells 7
[</em>] Personality trait?: company and effective innovative leadership, also talks about having fun with friends 10
[<em>] World You Come From:allegedly very touching about sibling relationship in separating divorce, came from the depths of my heart : ) 10
[</em>] Significant Challenge: similar thing about balancing life in working single parent household 10
[<em>] Other: The final supplement was about the company which I used for other schools as well 10
[</em>] Teacher Recommendation #1: MIT Alumni teacher for 3 semesters; hinted it was amazing
[<em>] Teacher Recommendation #2: Teacher for 4 semesters and major extracurric sponsor; probably awesome as well
[</em>] Counselor Rec: Generic although she’s really nice
[<em>] Additional Rec: From PI at lab; probably amazing
[</em>] Interview: Amazing; we talked about the company and the stem cell research; said he was very impressed and that he was sure I would do great things
[li] Art Supplement:[/ul]</p>[/li]
<p>Other[ul]
[<em>] Date Submitted App: Late
[</em>] State (if domestic applicant): Urban hyper competitive area
[<em>] Country (if international applicant):
[</em>] School Type:
[<em>] Ethnicity: Asian
[</em>] Gender: Female
[<em>] Income Bracket: Middle class
[</em>] Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.):[/ul] nothing besides what has been mentioned</p>
<p>Reflection[ul]
[<em>] Strengths: extracurriculars, recs and interview, essays, personality
[</em>] Weaknesses: freshman and sophomore grades; ap scores?
[<em>] Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Nice cohesive application with unusual extracurriculars/sense of social justice
[</em>] What would you have done differently?: not worry as much : P [/ul]</p>
<p>Other Factors:
**General Comments/Congratulations/Venting/Commiserations, etc: **Well, as advice for people (of similar mentality as myself as a junior), trawling pages and pages of these for their dream schools at 1AM, dreaming about the feeling of being accepted to -----, it’s all about being genuine. I have been asked to critique many college essays and applications, and it is very very obvious when someone is trying to be what they think adcoms would like, trying to fake passion, trying to mimic others or come up with a gigantic list of leadership positions such as president of [whatever nice sounding club that doesn’t actually do anything]. That’s not cool, nor fair to others who actually do stuff. Applications should have a wholesome feeling, to portray fluidly the different interlocking aspects of a person. Only when you support and pursue the passion for quantum physics that you claim to have can your application be believable. And finally, what’s better than inheriting an empire is creating one. Think about what you’re good at and try to channel your talents into helping out those less fortunate. And get your friends to help, inspire classmates along the way, and soon you’ll be a great person and/or admitted to -------</p>