Hi, I have a question… what about starting a common app essay with “CALL 911! Someone stole your attention! However, talking about someone, let me introduce myself.”
@yeahiknow ehhh. I don’t think that is a good start. It feels very gimmicky
Also, I’m available to read essays if anyone is looking for a reader. I’m a princeton alum. This site helped me a lot during high school, so I like to “give back.”
I like your positivity!
Are there any active readers at the moment?
May I have ur email? I really wish someone could see my essay thanks!!
@jeremyj do u mind to help me to read my essay? (Could I have ur background first.just to Ensure that my essay would not be leaked)
Yes, I’m a longstanding member who has never leaked an essay. 
@jeremyj do u mind to critique my essay?
@jeremyj I’m new here do u know how I can pm you? Thanks for willing to help!
Hey. International student and class of 2022 applicant here. Anyone up for reading my essays? ;
anyone willing to read some supplementary essays?
Can anyone read my essay? PM if possible
I also would appreciate it if someone read my essays. I’m applying as a transfer this fall. ( CCC to UC).
Same. Can I PM someone my personal statement to proofread?
Would anyone with a proven post record be willing to read my common app essay? Please pm me. Thanks.
Would anyone want to read mine? pm
I will be delighted to review your essay.
I’d love for someone with a proven post record to read my essays! Pls PM me!
Would really love some feedback on my Common App essay. PM me please!
If anyone would like to give some feedback on my Common App essay, I would really appreciate it. PM me if you are able.