Is anyone willing to read my common app essay (preferably college students or past). I’m applying ED to Duke and need some advice on my main essay. Thank u so much!
Hey I need someone to go through my Cornell supplement + common app essay for a Cornell ED as a CS major. Looking for first impressions, effectiveness, that sort of thing. Can’t send DMs for some reason, any help is appreciated.
Hi! Would someone please take the time to read my common app essay on science fiction? It’s finished, i would just appreciate some feedback on the overall impression the essay gives/how I could work on tone. Ty!
Hi! Would someone be willing to read my essay? I can’t PM, since I don’t have 15 posts yet. Thanks!
Hello everyone! I was curious if a good fellow would be kind enough to read my final personal statement for some important feedback and suggestions? I’m currently on my way to 15 posts, but would be happy if you could send me PMs! Most appreciated!
Hey! I know this must be getting really old, but is there anyone who would be willing to read my PS? I know its a lot to ask but I could really use some help with it (its my final draft). I can’t PM anybody for some reason so it would be awesome if you could PM me. Thanks in advance!
More than happy to help review anyone’s essays. I’ve personally helped thousands of college applicants over the years (both domestic and international), and yes I used to get paid for these services. But something about the idea of charging students bothered me, especially when considering vulnerable groups such as low-income families, first generation applicants, mental illness, immigrants whose parents might not have attended US colleges, and so I’ve decided to volunteer my time and help for free. I am passionate about helping the next generation succeed and think that college unpreparedness is holding young minds back from achieving their dreams.
I’ll help give suggestions on how to improve the essays, and can go as far as helping to fix grammar and spelling mistakes. However, keep in mind that I want students to grow and learn throughout the writing process and will ask that you do a bulk of the work in making changes. More than happy to go over multiple rounds of edits too.
Please understand that I will try to help as many students as possible, sry for any delay in response, don’t worry I will reply ASAP.
Wish all of you the best on your college applications and post-enrollment success.
Can someone PM me. I would like to get my essay reviewed by another eye.
hi, is this offer still available? (sorry I can’t PM because I just joined but I really need some help) @OTTO_thefriendlypony
could you pm me? @camcam2022
@IvyGrad09 CC isn’t letting me PM. Could you PM me and I can send you my essay?
@hgrad2010 CC isn’t letting me PM. Could you PM me and I can send you my essay?
Is there anyone who can help me with a college essay? Would like some feedback
I’m willing to read essays
Could you pm me and I’ll send you some, CC isn’t letting me PM
@hgrad2010 hello ^^ I don’t know if you’re still offering proofreading, but if it’s possible, do you mind commenting on my personal statement? I made sure it’s the final draft and I don’t find any mistakes.
I’m on my way to the 15th post, meanwhile, would you mind PM-ing me?
Hi, anyone willing to give feedback on an essay IDEA? Please PM if you’d be willing to.
Happy to help. All done for my kids after doing this process 2 years in a row.
I have a supplemental essay for Brown that I’d love if someone took a look at. Anyone willing to PM me and I’ll send it to you? Thanks!