Anyone willing to look at my common app written by me? I decided to build it around this samurai sword analogy and I’m worried if it’d seem too “artsy”
@rocioarg @Nomak54 I would read your essays. Mom of 2 in college: BU and Dartmouth and 1 in grad school. Have read and critiqued many essays.
Would anyone be willing to read my supplemental essay? I need help cutting I’m 40 words over the word count thanks!
Duke alum here! Happy to read and send edits!
I’m here to help! Current college freshman on winter break
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Would anyone be able to look at my Common App essay? I just opened an account so I will not be able to PM anyone. If you’re interested, please PM me!
@yamwhatyam Happy to take a look.
I know it’s super last minute, but I would love some advice on my last supplement essay. If you’re interested please PM me. I just opened an account so I’m unable to PM anyone.
I’d love to help.
PSA: Make sure those pm-ing you with offers of assistance have a proven record on CC and are not currently applying to colleges.
As you can see from my history, I’m a freshman currently on winter break!
Hello,
Would anyone be willing to have a look at my CA essay and share their opinions? If so, please PM me!
Many thanks.
College new grad happy to take a look at essays! Given my nonexistent history here, you can PM me and I can verify through my .edu email or something?
Would anyone be willing to look at an early draft of my common app essay? I need to cut about 100 words, but I’d be interested to hear some initial feedback! Thank you!
Hello all, 25 year old Junior Transfer Student here applying to UCLA for the new Public Affairs major. A lot of my political experience in Washington was highlighted in my essay to better balance out my application.
Would anyone be willing to take a look? I’ve submitted already, but would like a critique. My life has a very interesting story, so I promise it won’t be a dull/boring read.
I’ll read! I got lots of notes from admissions officers that my essay was the most memorable one they read this admissions cycle.
Could you please read mine?
I’ve worked a bit on my common app essay, and would love to hear some feedback! I’m at 751 words, so obviously I need to cut down quite a bit. Any help would be much appreciated 
I wrote a “why us” essay, and I am a lil insecure about its quality. Can anybody help me pls Thanks