Constructive feedback on UC Personal Statement?

College Essays
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<p>Hey fellow CCers,</p>

<p>I was hoping one of you fine people would be willing to read one of my UC personal statements and provide constructive feedback. I'd prefer it if you had some sort of credential to edit essays, ie, current college student, English teacher, etc. But if you're a high school senior and you wanna swap essays, go ahead and comment! I'd be glad to edit anyone else's essay, provided they'll edit mine. :)</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to swap essays with you :)</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to provide feedback!</p>

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<p>Hi Greneroom!</p>

<p>I’ll swap essay with you =)</p>

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<p>hello can u swap with mine</p>

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<p>yes, i can read it for you,PM me</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read!</p>