Controversial Princeton Essay!

College Essays
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<p>Hey, I've got an essay on this topic:</p>

<p>“One of the great challenges of our time is that the disparities we face today have more complex causes and point less straightforwardly to solutions.” Omar Wasow, Assistant Professor, Politics; Founder, Blackplanet.com This quote is taken from Professor Wasow's January 2014 speech at the Martin Luther King Day celebration at Princeton University.</p>

<p>It contains references to serial killers and pedophiles! Yay!</p>

<p>But seriously, I need a second (and third and fourth..) opinion on this essay. Different adults have said different things. I don't come across as a psychopath, but it is kind of risky.</p>

<p>Post and I'll PM!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll take a look. </p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. </p>

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<p>Sounds interesting, I’d be happy to read it!</p>

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<p>I can read and give feedback!</p>

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<p>I can take a look at it.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it</p>

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<p>Ah, sorry everyone but you all seem to have low post counts / are HS students. I’d prefer to have a parent read it, just don’t want to take any risks</p>

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<p>I’m a parent, but I don’t know what PM means other than personal message. Anyways, I am a lawyer and excellent writer. I’m on here to see what my sons need to do for SAT prep. I’m happy to read it as the subject matter (legal) piqued my interest!</p>

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<p>I’m happy to read it, if you still need some feedback.</p>

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<p>Interesting, I’ll read it!</p>