Cornell Essay - can someone give feedback?

College Essays
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<p>I am writing this college essay for Cornell. If anybody has been accepted to Cornell or knows someone who can tell me how the admissions may treat my essay or just has a natural ability to write very good essays, please tell read mine and give me some feedback. I'll email it.</p>

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<p>i think i’m a PURTY decent writer
feel free to e-mail me your essay
<a href="mailto:population_ctrl@yahoo.com">population_ctrl@yahoo.com</a> =)</p>

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<p>I’d be willing to offer some feedback. I am a fellow '15er so I understand if you’re a little apprehensive about it.</p>