Cornell essay! Help?

<p>I was wondering if anyone out there could give me some feedback on my essay for Cornell. I`m applying for ILR. :)</p>

<p>I can. I am not applying for ILR.</p>

<p>I can take a look if you want. I'm an ILR junior.</p>

<p>I'd be glad to take a look and offer feedback. I will be applying to CALS, not ILR. PM me :)</p>

<p>I'll read & critique it.</p>

<p>I'll gladly read it, I applied ED to HumEc.
Send me the prompt as well.</p>

<p>As an ILR alum, I'm good for a quick read and a two sentence critique...</p>