Cornell Supplement... I tried to be funny, any suggestions?

College Essays
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<p>It's about 300 words too long ;-) ... is that a big deal? Any/all suggestions/criticisms are welcome!</p>

<p>I'd love to PM it to somebody so they could give me some feedback!</p>

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<p>PM it to me please.</p>

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<p>Should be fine. I can look if you want still.</p>

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<p>PM me ill respond fast.</p>

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<p>I'll look at it.</p>

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<p>I'll look at it. PM me.</p>

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<p>I'l read it over.</p>

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<p>PM me. I'll take a look!</p>

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<p>If you are not a funny guy, do not pretend to be one. A good essay always shows characters, or it is not a good essay. You may pm me if you want.</p>

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<p>I'd love to review it.</p>

<p>As a disclaimer, I'm in the class of '08. I've already finished my essays, although I can't really prove that, and I promise to leave a thorough, honest review.</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>PM me and I'll take a look at it</p>

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<p>Sounds Interesting! I would like to help!</p>

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<p>you can pm me</p>