Cornell Transfer Essay - please, read and share your thoughts

Transfer Students
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<p>post here if you'd like to read my essay and I will pm it to you.</p>

<p>I'm applying to CAS from California Community College.</p>

<p>Any help from current Cornellians would be appreciated even more :D</p>

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<p>hey, I could read yours, and give you some feedback.</p>

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<p>I can read, but it takes some days for the feedback.</p>

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<p>I can read, but I think I need some time to send back feedback. :)</p>

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<p>Off topic.</p>

<p>Whats ur GPA if you dont mind me asking? Major?</p>

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<p>I’ll read your essay. I’m a tutor by the way :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I’m applying to CALS. You think you can help me with mine also? Thanks</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and get back to you ASAP!</p>

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<p>horse9118: What is your major? I’m applying to CALS as an Animal Science major.</p>

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<p>My GPA in transferable courses is 4.0, cumulative is 3.75 (because of stupid algebra courses that I didn’t care about because they weren’t supposed to transfer anywhere).</p>

<p>Major - Philosophy.
I’m transferring from a CA community college.
thanks everyone. I just pm’ed those who offered to read my essay</p>

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<p>Would be glad to help, PM it over :)</p>

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<p>I can read it if you want, I might be able to help you with ideas/organization but not grammar.</p>

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<p>Sure, I’d be glad to review your essay. PM me.</p>