could a williams student or someone please look at my williams supplement?

<p>Hi, everyone</p>

<p>I have two drafts for my williams essay
I am not sure which one to choose
could a williams student give me suggestions?
Anyone willing to help is appreciated!</p>

<p>Hi,</p>

<p>If you still need advice, just PM me your supplement and I can try to help. I’m a Williams hopeful (applied ED) :)</p>

<p>Good luck!</p>

<p>Hey! If you haven’t turned in your application yet, I’d be happy to take a look at them for you : ) I know how stressful choosing a college can be, so if you have any questions or want a current freshman’s perspective, feel free to ask. Best of luck!</p>