could anyone give me suggestions?

College Essays
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<p>I have my common app essay finished, and I would love it if a parent or college student could perhaps read my essay over. i'm kinda worried that it is not strong enough to get me into some of the schools I am looking at. PM me if you'd like. thanks!</p>

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<p>I’ll do it!
I sent you a PM</p>

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<p>thanks. anybody else?</p>

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<p>I can read it over if you’d like!</p>

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<p>I’d love to! PM me</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll do it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>I’ll also read it, if you’d like.</p>