Could anyone look over my Brown essay please?

<p>I was hoping someone who has already been accepted or who goes to Brown could maybe look over my essay and see if it’s good to go! Thanks in advance :)</p>

<p>I chose this prompt:
Tell us about an intellectual experience, project, class, or book that has influenced or inspired you.</p>

<p>That’s the prompt I chose, too. I’ll look it over for you if you want. Keep in mind that I don’t know anything; I was just accepted. x)</p>

<p>Hehe no problem. I’d just like an opinion of someone who’s not my coddling family or too-nice friends. :stuck_out_tongue:
I’ll PM it to you!</p>

<p>lolol. My friends were brutal. >.></p>