Could anyone please rate my college essay? I'll inbox it!

<p>Hey, so I'm a senior and I wrote my Common App essay draft. Would anyone mind reading it? I'll inbox it to them if they're interested. Please rate it on a scale of 1-10. Tell me what's good, what's bad, what I should change or remove and what I should keep or fix/enhance. Some tips or strategies would be appreciated. Thanks!</p>

<p>Anyone?</p>

<p>I can take a look at it if you want</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I can read it.</p>

<p>send it to me please~</p>

<p>I can help!</p>

<p>I’ll do it</p>

<p>I can do it!</p>

<p>Send it to me if you want lol</p>

<p>I am a Duke alumni and I volunteer for interviews. I would be happy to read. Please send via PM</p>

<p>I can read it and give you my suggestions concerning the content if you want </p>

<p>plz send it to me :)</p>

<p>If you still want a new perspective, I’d be glad to read it.</p>