<p>I finished my first draft of my essay, and it is on my experience as a ball boy in the US Open put in context of my life.</p>
<p>Please let me know if you would be willing to take a look and offer some criticism</p>
<p>I am applying to HYP, Penn, Rice, and Brandeis</p>
<p>PM me, and I’ll read it and give you some feedback.</p>
<p>Yep, PM me.</p>
<p>i’ll read it if you want</p>
<p>PM that bizitch</p>
<p>I’ll read it and give feedback. PM it over.</p>
<p>Sure thing PM me!</p>
<p>Pm it over!</p>
<p>I will read it kind sir!</p>
<p>if you still need help, PM me</p>
<p>Thanks so much everyone!</p>