could anyone read my 150 & 250 words essays??

College Essays
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<p>I would love a good critique!!
thnkx</p>

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<p>i'd like to help. send it over!</p>

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<p>i want to :]</p>

4

<p>i'll read :D
pm me</p>

5

<p>sure...pm me</p>

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<p>I"ll read the 150!</p>

7

<p>sure I'll read them both :)</p>

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<p>I'll read both (:</p>

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<p>bump!!
any other wanting to read.. i seriously need some critique..!</p>

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<p>bump!
i did some editing in both the essays..
I have 2 more .. 700 (common app) and 550 (Why X College)!!!</p>

<p>Does anyone want 2 read it??</p>

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<p>thnkx guys.. sent to u all!</p>

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<p>Sure, I'd love to read it... and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>