<p>Hi everybody,
I would appreciate it if anyone could read my common app essay and tell me what they think. I've been working on it for a while, but after getting deferred from my top choice, I became paranoid that the essay might need some more work. I'm mainly just looking for general thoughts on it and feelings, but revisions would be appreciated as well.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>I’ll be happy to review and give you some thoughts/ideas. </p>
<p>sure i’ll read it </p>
<p>i’ll also read it if you’d like, but i may or may not be slow in replying</p>
<p>I can help</p>
<p>I can take a look PM </p>
<p>PM me and i would love to help</p>
<p>@catmeow If you still need someone to look over your essays, I’d love to take a look. If you’re interested in applying to Cornell specifically, I think I could provide you with a bit of insight on that as well. </p>