Could anyone take the time to read my CA essay? Thanks!

College Essays
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Hey guys, really worried about my essay and if it comes across well… especially since I have no idea what constitutes a “good” Common App Essay. I have tried to rewrite it but to no avail.

I was Deferred from a HYPSM school so this could be the problem. Thanks!

Also, not to be a jerk (I’m really sorry if I sound like it!), but I would rather PM it to high rep users only.

Thanks for the help!!! :slight_smile: :slight_smile: :slight_smile:

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Please… anyone?

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i will read it

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I’ll edit it

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Thanks everyone but I’m only looking for high rep / post count users. I’m really sorry and don’t mean to be offensive! (I’m sure you are all far greater writers than I am)… just really paranoid about these things… any high rep users wanna see it? :slight_smile:

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Anyone… ?