Could I get some comments on my essay?

<p>Please PM me if interested!</p>

<p>hit me up, i'll see what i can do</p>

<p>you can pm me for advice..</p>

<p>same here..</p>

<p>you can PM me also. =)</p>

<p>BUMP - Could I get people who will ACTUALLY COMMENT on my essay? I sent it to the above 3 posters, and got nothing.</p>

<p>I'll take a look and comment</p>

<p>A2Wolves6, if they're not replying back with comments, they probably just wanted to look at your essay in hopes of stealing an idea or two. -_-; So you have to be careful.</p>

<p>When I read an essay, I always comment back what I think would improve the essay. But right now, I'm too tired with my own essay to do much of that nowadays. =_=;</p>

<p>I'll look at it and I will comment on it as best I can</p>

<p>Well, I don't know what ideas they would steal, because it's not that goo, which is why i'm asking for advice!</p>

<p>pm me and i'll give you advice....</p>