Could somebody take a quick look at my Common App essay? No corrections needed just feedback

<p>Hi all, I've been done with my common app essay for some time and used it to apply EA to a school where I was deferred, so the paranoia is sinking in now. I was told that the essay was very good, and i have spent hours upon hours tweaking it, so if someone else could give it a quick read and tell me what he/she thinks of it I might be able to focus on bettering another part of my application. Thanks so much :)</p>

<p>You can send me the essay, but post in the essay forum next time. </p>

<p>You can send it to me.</p>

<p>bump anyone else?</p>

<p>I will give you my opinion on it. Just send it to me.</p>

<p>bump need more opinions</p>

<p>I’ll take a look </p>

<p>I can look at it</p>

<p>I can take a look at it too</p>

<p>sure, send it over</p>

<p>If you need any other readers, I’d be happy to read it.</p>

<p>I too would be happy to read it:)</p>

<p>You may send it to me… My pleasure if I can help you :smile: </p>