Could someone check my commonapp essay for Harvard, Stanford, Yale, etc.

College Essays
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<p>I was wondering if someone could check my common app essay whose not applying to college this year. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I’m applying this year, but I’m also looking to have someone read my Common Application essay. Want to swap essays for feedback? Also, not applying to HYPS or any other Ivies, so no worries there.</p>

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<p>Send me any essays (I’ll try to give some constructive feedback…)</p>

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<p>sure send it over</p>

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<p>Since you’re not applying this year, I’ll be glad to read it!</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to</p>

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<p>I’d love to!!!</p>

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<p>I can help, send it over :)</p>

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<p>Yep, send it over…</p>

<p>'13</p>

<p>Sent from my SGH-T959V using CC</p>

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<p>What’s the point of advertising that you’re sending the essays to Ivies? Seems like some people would want to read it based only on the schools that you’re applying to, rather than giving you actual feedback.</p>

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<p>I’ll read (: not applying this year.</p>

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<p>I’ll read. I’m not applying until next year, happy to help.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it AND provide feedback ;)</p>

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<p>AHEM. This thread was from December. It got revived along the way when it shouldn’t have been. Unless the author is still monitoring this thread, I think we should move past it.</p>

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<p>^ lol this made me laugh so hard.</p>