Could someone give me a feedback on my essay for Yale SCEA

I finished my Common App essay, and would like to see what other think about it.

I’m a parent of a HS senior, I will look at it if you want.

Parent of a Dartmouth grad. PM it to me.

Hey, im applying to stanford rea. ill read your essay if you read mine

I’ll take a look for you :slight_smile:

I totally can. Mad fun to read essays IMO. PM me if you’re interested.

@AnxiousHam totally agree reading essays is fun! Haha anyway I’m assuming OP already submitted because it’s early action but @colleges321 I too am available to read since you’ll probably need to use common app essay for regular decision later anyway?

I would love to read it and give any useful insight!

just pm me if you want

PM me if you still need opinions