Could someone give me their opinion on my 1st possible common app essay

College Essays
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<p>Hi there, would love to know if you could read my first common app essay and let me know what you think!</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>I’ll read it - PM it to me..but I WILL be critical ;)</p>

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<p>Ha ha..cool that’s exactly what i wanted</p>

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<p>I’ll critique it if you want.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it, but i’m applying to brown too so don’t send if you fear a conflict of interest or whatever…i promise i won’t steal your essay though lol</p>

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<p>I’ll comment if you want :)</p>

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<p>I’ll comment.</p>

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<p>I’ll gladly put in my two cents. :]</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>i would be glad to read it, pm it over!!</p>

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<p>PM it to me!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you’d like</p>

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<p>suree pm me</p>

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<p>Cool PM me!!</p>

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<p>ME too ! Pm me.</p>

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<p>PM me too. I’ll critique it .</p>

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<p>i’ll read it =]</p>

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<p>I can read too, so I guess I can put my skills to work for you.</p>

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<p>Class of '08. Feel free to PM.</p>

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<p>well written essay . I already PMed you with my comments</p>