I’ve been preparing for the December ACT with a few sample prompts and need help.
For this prompt: http://magoosh.com/hs/act/act-practice/2015/act-writing-prompt-for-the-new-act-essay/
I wrote this: http://pastebin.com/EamRFrLb
And for this prompt: http://www.act.org/aap/pdf/Sample-Writing-Prompt.pdf
I wrote this: http://pastebin.com/03R5wBAh
What grade would these get, and how could I improve on them? Thanks a lot in advance!