Could someone help me edit my Common App essay?

<p>I would prefer people who aren't 09'ers. I think it still needs a lot of work but I really want other peoples opinions.</p>

<p>any one willing to read my essay?</p>

<p>I need to finish by Friday, Im applying EA, please help.</p>

<p>i'll read it
but im an 09er</p>

<p>but i assure you i wont be stealing your ideas or whatever</p>