<p>I've gotten multiple contrasting responses to the essay - a few people thought it was great and a few others basically told me to scrap it. I'm not sure if I just need to edit it a bit or if I should start all over again, so constructive criticism would be very helpful. Post here or PM me and I'll send you the essay. Thanks!</p>
<p>yea sure. I would like to see your constructions. lol…pun. Organization is important. Pm me if you will. thanks.</p>
<p>i just submitted my apps and im kinda nervous, so I guess I’ll take a read to take my mind off my own application lol :)</p>
<p>Thanks. Anyone else want to take a look at it? I’d appreciate it.</p>
<p>Sure, I’ll take a look at it.</p>