<p>If you're interested, could you PM me on here and I'll show you my essay (don't want to risk plagiarism on here). I'm willing to look over other people's essays; my main issue is that my essay is too passive (I had my friend who attends Northeastern and my English teacher read it so far). They say the vocabulary and writing is good, but that it is too passive. If anyone would be willing to look over it for me than I would really appreciate it. :)</p>
<p>I would change the cat’s name.</p>
<p>i wanna have mine loooked over too someone?</p>
<p>OP, you should delete your other thread considering that you do not want to risk plagiarism. That’s how I read your essay. </p>
<p>I’ll add my other comments to the doc.</p>