Could someone please proof my why columbia blurb

[vanillachocolate]

<p>I would really reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaly appreciate it.</p>

[justbelieve]

<p>sure-- just pm it to me.</p>

[xdaaaaan]

<p>sure pm me!</p>

[Duygu]

<p>Yeah, I can do it if you want.</p>

[kMz]

<p>I'd be glad to take a look and offer feedback. PM me!
I won't be applying to Columbia, btw.</p>

[perio]

<p>I don't mind looking at it as well, if you want. PM me.</p>

[PeterP]

<p>If you're still looking...feel free to PM me.</p>

[laurangai]

<p>PM me if u want : ) I'll give you feedb.</p>

[jmeelynn]

<p>I'd read it too, if you wanna send it to me.</p>

[adrivit]

<p>Send it over!!</p>