<p>Could someone that is ALREADY in brown please proofread my writing for the application? </p>
<p>I would like to get a 2nd opinion. </p>
<p>If you can, please pm me ur msn or aim thank you.</p>
<p>I suggest asking an English teacher to edit or proofread</p>
<p>sure, i'll proofread it, if you get it to me today i'll give in less than 24 hours</p>