Could someone please read my college essay?

<p>Prompt is: Choose an issue of importance to you - the issue could be personal, school related, local, political, or international in scope - and write an essay in which you explain the significance of that issue to yourself, your family, your community, our your generation.</p>

<p>I will PM you the essay, any suggestions would be greatly appreciated, please help! THANKS IN ADVANCE!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look if you want</p>