Could someone please read my Common App essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Hey! My name is Nadia. I was wondering if any of you would like to read/critique my essay? It would also be helpful if you could tell me what your perception of me as a person would be after reading my essay. Thanks!</p>

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<p>I would love too :D</p>

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<p>I PMed you! : )</p>

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<p>PM me. It’ll be the first essay from CC I critique.</p>

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<p>You can send it to me.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read/review! :)</p>