Could someone please read my penn supplement?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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<p>I'm going to submit my ED application in a few days... can someone please read my supplement and make sure it's okay? I tried to make it unique, and not "blah, blah," but i'm not sure if this is what they're looking for...
Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>if you wrote something to suit “what they’re looking for,” you’re probably screwed. If you wrote something that shows your true colors, you’re in the running.</p>

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<p>PM it to me. I’ll let you know what I think!</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to read it. just PM it over</p>

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<p>I will! :slight_smile: pm it to me!</p>

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<p>Sure man, PM it to me and I’ll do my best to give you my thoughts on it</p>

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<p>Yeah man, PM it to me and I’ll gladly take a look :]</p>

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<p>PM it to me, I shall read it :slight_smile: I am one of the HARSHEST editors in my school, I will tear it up!</p>

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<p>I can read it as well if you’d like. Same format as the common app, but I already have your email address so no need to resend that. You can just email me directly if you want too.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look and give you some opinions if you’d like.</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look at it. pm me</p>

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<p>I’ll have a look.</p>

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<p>i can take a look.</p>

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<p>ill take a look</p>

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<p>i take can a look :)</p>

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<p>i submitted my penn application yesterday, so i don’t need any additional editors for my supplement! Thanks to everyone who offered! Ahhhh wish me luck!</p>