Could someone read and comment on my Common App Essay? I'll return the favor!

College Essays
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<p>I'm applying to Harvard, Yale, Vanderbilt, Johns Hopkins, and some safeties (University of Tulsa and Oklahoma City University, for ex.) and need some additional opinions on my essay, besides what my English teacher can give me. I'll send you a PM with my essay if you're interested, and I'll critique yours too.</p>

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<p>I will read yours, I don’t have mine done yet though, but I can send you what I have?</p>

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<p>i will, soon as i finish mines</p>

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<p>I’m interested go ahead and PM me your essay love.=)</p>

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<p>i’ll read it :slight_smile: i’m applying to the university of michigan and would love some feedback on my common app essay as well!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read!</p>

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<p>Send please! I love reading essays!</p>

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<p>ill read it :)</p>

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<p>I will read it, please read mine too</p>

<p>Sent from my HTC Incredible S using CC App</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. Mine has gotten a sparkling review from my teacher but mixed reviews from family; so feedback from a complete stranger would be nice.</p>

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<p>pm me it and ill get you a response</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! :)</p>

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<p>ill read it :D</p>

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<p>I would love to read it! :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I’m also applying to the same schools so it should be a good trade.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you can give mine a looK!</p>