Could someone read my UC essay

Applying to College
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<p>I just wrote an essay on "what I could bring to the UC campus"......I'm not sure if its any good....is anyone willing to read it and give me some feed back?</p>

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<p>Ill read it.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look.</p>

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<p>Same here.. if it's still needed</p>

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<p>Sure. I just finished my too. Posting it soon</p>

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<p>i can take a look</p>

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<p>I'll take a look! PM me!</p>

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<p>ill read it. pm me</p>

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<p>I can give you feedback.</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>i'll give feedback</p>

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<p>ill comment</p>

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<p>ill read it!</p>

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<p>I'll give feedback.</p>

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<p>sure ill read</p>

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<p>Hey Bondsfan,</p>

<p>I'll read and critique your essays for you.</p>

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<p>sure i ll read and comment it</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>ill read it..</p>

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<p>sure i'll read it</p>