<p>Since it's an important part of the application, could someone take a look and give me some comments?</p>
<p>yeah! PM it to me and I'll tell you what I think</p>
<p>and I'm a junior in hs so don't worry about me copying or anything ;)</p>
<p>you can pm it to me too. don't worry about me copying cos i'm not interested in columbia...i'm into USC..and i've already written my essay and i love it...so haha.</p>
<p>Feel free to mail if you can handle my criticism.</p>
<p>PM me if you can bear criticism....</p>