Could someone read my writing supplement?

<p>I figured I should get a head start on my college essays, and since I already knew what BU’s writing supplement was, I figured I could write it now. If anybody would be willing to a read my very rough first draft, I’d love to email it to you and receive feedback. Thanks :)</p>

<p>You can feel free to private message it to me! I’d be happy to give you constructive feedback!</p>

<p>I’d also be happy to! I am a current freshman at BU School of Management. Go terriers!</p>