Could someone review my essays?

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys, I was wondering if someone could take a look at one of my essays for the Common App.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>Sure pm me</p>

3

<p>I definitely will. Pm me if you’d like</p>

4

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! :)</p>

<p>and @smorgasbord, I love your username!! that’s one of my favorite words :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read! :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>Send a pm, I’ll give basic feedback.</p>

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<p>sure! pm me!</p>

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<p>Absolutely! Just private message me, and I’ll be delighted to take a look and provide constructive feedback.</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me and I’ll edit/comment.</p>