Could someone take a look at my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi there, just need some people to take a look at my common app essay and see if it might go a little too far, or perhaps not enough. Just comment or message me if you are willing to take a look at it. Thanks!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look for you!</p>

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<p>I would be willing to provide some feedback.</p>

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<p>BumP10char</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a look</p>

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<p>I’ll read!</p>

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<p>I will read it, PM me.</p>

<p>Complimentary thread hijack - can the extracurricular short answer common app portion be about a one-time EC, like an annual competition?</p>