<p>Hey guys!</p>
<p>Ya...title basically says it all. I feel that my answer is really awkward with the 500 character word limit, so I'd greatly appreciate the feedback of someone already admitted into Yale on it! Just post below and Ill pm it to you.</p>
<p>THANKS,
Robbie</p>
<p>I’m not already admitted, but I’ll be willing to look at it, if you wish.
Can’t promise positive feedback, but you will get feedback.</p>
<p>I am admitted and would love to read it.</p>
<p>If you want, I’d love to read it 
I’ll send honest feedbacks.</p>
<p>same! I’ll read it :)</p>
<p>i’ll show you mine if you show me yours (hehe)
but in all seriously, ill read it if you can critique mine back.</p>
<p>i’d love to see what u’ve got</p>
<p>i’ll give you feedback. :)</p>
<p>yup ditto here</p>
<p>I’ll read it too! </p>
<p>I haven’t submitted either, but I have everything filled out and I am just checking over technicalities.</p>
<p>PM me.</p>
<p>I submitted mine. PM me too.</p>
<p>I’d be able to give you feedback! PM :)</p>