<p>Topic: Are people's lives the result of the choices they make?</p>
<p>Essay: ImageShack</a> Album - 2 images</p>
<p>Could someone please grade my essay? Any comments are appreciated. Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>The print is to small. Sorry:(</p>
<p>Can you try clicking on the text a few times, please? Thanks.</p>
<p>I would give it a 4/5, not exactly sure. There were a few grammatical errors and I would suggest trying to use a more complex vocabulary to hold the reader’s attention. Overall it was a pretty good essay. I liked that you were able to use different types of examples to support your argument and heighten the level of interest.</p>