Could you please read my two essays & give me feedback?

College Essays
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<p>You can also give yours to me, if you want:) (We can share & give feedback to each other!)</p>

<p>You should PM me!!</p>

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<p>Yes. PM me.</p>

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<p>ill read it.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it if you don't mind having '08 people reading it. PM me your essay and I could PM you mine.</p>

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<p>i'll give it a go :)</p>

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<p>PM me, i'll check it</p>

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<p>pm me. i will take a look</p>

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<p>pm me ill take a look</p>

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<p>I would love to help.</p>

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<p>I'll read it; just PM me! I'll probably take you up on that offer, too!</p>

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<p>pm me.....</p>

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<p>PM me ill take a look at it!</p>

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<p>pm me, too. I'd like changing essays.</p>

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<p>PM me, i'll have a look</p>