Could you please score my essay

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<p>Topic: Is the way something seems to be not always the same as it actually is?</p>

<p>Essay: ImageShack</a> Album - 2 images</p>

<p>Could you please score my essay? Any comments would be appreciated! Also, do you get quotations on the SAT that have no author?</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>Anyone, please?</p>

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<p>I give 9/12</p>

<p>Very good improvement on handwriting
I liked your thesis and examples, and I also liked how you used the original quotation in your body paragraphs.</p>

<p>If you slightly improve on vocabulary and sentence structure you could have a solid 11 or 12.</p>

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<p>Thanks a lot! Hopefully I can incorporate your advice into my next essay.</p>

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<p>10/12</p>

<p>please score this essay
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