Could you please take a look at my Common App essay?

[VVVVVVVVV]

<p>Anyone willing to take a look?</p>

<p>Thanks,</p>

<p>VVVVVVVVV</p>

[Rolando4]

<p>I’ll do it if you can read/edit mine in return?! :)</p>

[sarcasmrules]

<p>Send it over, will you read mine too?</p>

[xAxBxC]

<p>I’ll look over it! DM it to me :)</p>