<p>Hi there,</p>
<p>I just wrote my essay but im not very sure wad kinda standard i should be aiming for. is there anyone who's willing to help read my essay? </p>
<p>thanks. :)</p>
<p>Hello
PM it over, and give me your email address. I’ll send it back on word document</p>
<p>anyone kind enough to help me, please??? :(</p>
<p>I’ll read it and comment back.
Julia</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you’ll PM me. BTW, I’ve never met anyone from Borneo. I’d recommend that your essay reflect your obvious uniqueness as an applicant.</p>
<p>I’ll read it, but I am also applying to Harvard this year. I promise I won’t copy or try to give you bad advice or anything though. Just wanted to let you know.</p>
<p>thanks. 
i just pm-ed u guys my essay. Its quite cultural. I hope u all enjoy reading it.</p>
<p>anyone else? =D</p>
<p>I’d love to. PM me, i would love to learn something about Borneo</p>