creative attempt at UC essays :]

College Essays
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<p>Hi everyone!</p>

<p>so i need someone to critique my creative UC essay about a treasure box</p>

<p>Please NO '13ers (i dont want to waste your time or mine), preferably someone who was accepted to Berkeley/LA or an adult :]</p>

<p>i'm a little confused as to if i SHOULD even be creative? heard that UC prefers straight to the pt :[</p>

<p>So if you're interested PM me and thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>no one interested D: anyonee?? help is greatly appreciated!!</p>

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<p>Sure, you can PM me and I’ll give it a look over.</p>

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<p>bump! 10 char</p>